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3.20 AM by ~Estallo-en-Impacto:iconEstallo-en-Impacto:

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I hear emergency vehicles.
Lots of wind.
Banging, crashing sounds.
It's 3:20 AM.

Something is wrong.
Something is wrong.
©2008 ~Estallo-en-Impacto
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~GrumpySay:iconGrumpySay: Mar 19, 2008, 10:20:29 PM
how about...help...or....crashing....or....idk im out of answers

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~Estallo-en-Impacto:iconEstallo-en-Impacto: Mar 19, 2008, 10:26:51 PM
yeah and i dont wanna just go and call it "something is wrong" cause i think thatd change the poem somehow...

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~GrumpySay:iconGrumpySay: Mar 19, 2008, 10:33:13 PM
whats the meaning of this poem...i picture a person in a car wreck, almost smashed in, but still alive and...the car is upside down....and there are police officers and what not are there

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~Estallo-en-Impacto:iconEstallo-en-Impacto: Mar 20, 2008, 1:14:13 AM
well there is no meaning. i wrote what was going on outside when i couldnt sleep. i just wrote all that was true. and i felt like something was wrong.

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~meaikoh:iconmeaikoh: Mar 20, 2008, 7:35:43 AM
Maybe something like '3:20 AM.'

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~theshyfox:icontheshyfox: Mar 20, 2008, 11:58:40 AM
uh... It should be silent. Thats the first thing that comes to mind.

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~theshyfox:icontheshyfox: Mar 20, 2008, 11:59:09 AM
minus the uh... part...

"It should be silent" there we go... thats a tad bit more clear.

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~Estallo-en-Impacto:iconEstallo-en-Impacto: Mar 20, 2008, 1:20:25 PM
so it should have no title? or just a very passive title

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